Tuesday, 30 April 2019

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a Recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write an orientation, events in order, and  an ending.

In the holidays my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim. It was a hot day. I saw a dolphin jumping in the water. Mum bought me an ice cream. I said thank you. 
We packed up and went back home.
                                               By Patricia


Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe popcorn using our five senses.

Today we made popcorn. It popped like fire crackers. It looked white and yellow. It felt bumpy and lumpy. It tasted buttery and salty. It smelt delicious when it was cooked in the microwave. It was crunchy in my mouth. 

                                        By Patricia