My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a Recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write an orientation, events in order, and  an ending.

In the holidays my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim. It was a hot day. I saw a dolphin jumping in the water. Mum bought me an ice cream. I said thank you. 
We packed up and went back home.
                                               By Patricia