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Friday, 31 May 2019

Our Autumn Tree


Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.

Our Autumn Tree looks colourful. The leaves are fluttering in the wind and they are gliding softly to the ground. The autumn leaves are rustling in the wind. The brown leaves are crunching and crackling under my feet when I walk on them.
                                               By Patricia.

Tuesday, 30 April 2019

My Trip To The Beach


Learning goal: We are learning to write a Recount.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write an orientation, events in order, and  an ending.

In the holidays my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim. It was a hot day. I saw a dolphin jumping in the water. Mum bought me an ice cream. I said thank you. 
We packed up and went back home.
                                               By Patricia

Popcorn


Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe popcorn using our five senses.


Today we made popcorn. It popped like fire crackers. It looked white and yellow. It felt bumpy and lumpy. It tasted buttery and salty. It smelt delicious when it was cooked in the microwave. It was crunchy in my mouth. 

                                        By Patricia

Thursday, 28 February 2019