I can see the trucks rumbling along the the road. The cars are speeding and I can smell the burning rubber.The ground is shaking when the heavy trucks go past our school. The motorbikes roar as they go past. It is very noisy. By Patricia
Hi there Patrica, I really enjoyed your descriptive text about the traffic that travels past St. Patricks school. Your use of descriptive language makes to your story come alive. Well done.
Hi there Patrica, I really enjoyed your descriptive text about the traffic that travels past St. Patricks school. Your use of descriptive language makes to your story come alive. Well done.
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